I edited every sentence of this question and the title, as well as moved the bible verse up a line as it made more sense in that sequence. (It still has to be approved).
I felt quite good doing it and think I could make a habit out of this.
Is this proper?
The positives are self evident.
However, if not being careful, editing grammar like this (every sentence) could result in a distortion of the original intention of the question.